Saturday, December 15, 2007

S.E Hinton's...That Was Then,This Is Now

Bryan's credit was running low with the Bartender.Everytime he gets in the Pool hall he orders a 15 cent Coke.The bill was slowly building up and before he knew it he owed 3 dollars. Back in that time 3 dollars was alot of money, and if u dont pay up you'll get beat up. Now Bryan had to talk his way out of trouble he was good for that.''If u bring me a coke now, I'll pay you tomorrow.'' See Bryan showed respect an got respected.

1 comment:

Mr. Malley said...

Vince, choose one of the questions. This is a little plot summary and a little commentary ("Back in that time 3 dollars was alot of money, and if u dont pay up you'll get beat up" and "Bryan showed respect an got respected"). The commentary would be a good place to build from.